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5 Questions to Help You Write Better Characters

Have you ever read a story where the main character felt flat or boring? I have.

Don’t get me wrong, creating compelling characters for your story is not an easy task—but it is necessary if you want to write a story that works.

 

Just like in real life, your characters should be well-rounded and fully-developed. So, before you start writing your next novel, you need to ask yourself some important questions about your characters.

I’m not talking about those character questionnaires that ask you to list random facts like your character’s favorite color or hobby; I’m talking about the deep and specific questions that will help you get to the heart of who your character really is. In other words, the type of questions that will actually help you develop and write your story.

So, what are these questions? How do we make sure our characters don’t fall flat on the page?

Well, in today’s post, I’m going to share with you five questions to ask about your characters before you start writing. By asking these five questions, you’ll start to see your story take shape before you even consider things like story structure or setting or point-of-view or dialogue (you can tackle those later).

Exciting right? Let’s dive in!

1. What does your character want?

Each of your characters needs to have a goal because, in real life, everybody wants something. And a character who wants something is someone who will actively pursue their goals which is what creates the external plot of your story.

So, what kind of goals are we talking about? Well, in a murder mystery, the detective’s goal might be to catch the murderer and bring him or her to justice. In a horror novel, the protagonist’s goal might be to survive the threat of the monster and eventually defeat it. This would be your character's main, overarching story goal.

Then, once you know your character’s main, over-arching story goal, you can come up with smaller goals that they’ll need to accomplish in order to achieve their story goal. These smaller goals will be your scene goals. And these scene goals should be moving your character closer to the climax of your global story. So, for example, in a horror novel, if the protagonist’s goal is to defeat the monster, one of her scene goals might be to find out more about one of the monster’s weaknesses.

If you look at a story like The Hunger Games, Katniss wants to win the Hunger Games, right? That's her over-arching story goal. Her micro-goals, or scene goals, might be things like: get supplies from the Cornucopia, or find Peeta, or kill Kato, or sleep through the night -- things like that. Each of those smaller goals helps her get one step closer to facing off with the other remaining tribute in the story's climax.

Questions to ask of your character:

  • What does your character think he or she wants before readers meet them on page one?
  • Why doesn’t your character have this yet? OR if he or she has it already, why isn’t he or she happy?
  • How will their goal change after the Inciting Incident drags him or her into the main conflict of the story?
  • What micro-goals will help your character achieve his or her overarching story goal?

 

2. Why does your character want this?

Once you’ve determined WHAT your character wants, you need to ask WHY they want it. In other words, what’s motivating them to go through all this trouble and pain in order to achieve this goal?

Motivation is what makes your character take action toward a specific desired outcome. In other words, your character’s motivation is the engine that will drive your story AND give your character agency over their life and their decisions.

So, for example, in The Hunger Games, Katniss's motivation is super clear. If she doesn't volunteer as tribute, Prim will die. Once she enters the arena, she's motivated to survive so that she can go back to taking care of Prim and their mother. 

Questions to ask of your character:

  • Why does my character want what he or she wants?
  • What will achieving this goal mean to your character?

3. What’s standing in your character’s way externally?

If your character could automatically achieve their story goal, you’d have nothing to write about. That means you’ll need to throw some kind of conflict in your character’s way to keep things interesting for your protagonist and your reader.

In general, there are two main types of conflict—external conflict and internal conflict.

External conflict comes from outside the character. It’s the WHO or WHAT that’s standing in your character’s way in the outside world. In other words, it’s the external obstacles that make up your plot. For example, this could be an antagonistic character or an antagonistic force like a hurricane or harsh winter, lack of money, or an asteroid. 

As your story progresses, the external conflict your character faces should get worse and worse. In other words, the moments of external conflict in your story should get progressively more complicated and harder to deal with. If you don’t progressively complicate your character’s life, the forward momentum of your story will stall, and you’ll bore your readers. 

So, for example, in The Hunger Games, Katniss faces all kinds of external conflict, right? If you look at just the time she spends in the arena, things get harder and harder as more tributes die, supplies dwindle down, and she loses allies like Rue. Not only that, but the game makers have to keep coming up with more and more conflict for the tributes to face to keep the "show" interesting for viewers. Every new challenge is harder for Katniss to face -- if it wasn't, the story would get boring pretty quickly, right?

Questions to ask of your character:

  • Who or what is standing in my character’s way in the outside world?
  • Who or what does my character need to overcome by the end of the story?
  • How can I make things progressively more complicated for my character?

 

4. What’s standing in your character’s way internally?

Just like in real life, your character has a past. This is called your character’s backstory.

Knowing your character’s backstory is important because everything that happened before we meet your character on page one will color everything that’s happening to him or her now.

That means you’ll need to dig into your character’s relevant backstory to uncover useful pieces of information that will not only help your character seem like a real person but will also help you create inner conflict for your character to face.

Inner conflict comes from inside the character themselves. It’s whatever they bring to the story both emotionally and intellectually. For example, this could be doubt, confusion, a false belief about themselves or the world, etc.

Whatever it is, your character will need to face and overcome this internal conflict in order to succeed in dealing with the external conflict (or the plot events) in your story. 

 

For example, in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone, Harry has a hard time accepting all the attention and fame that comes with being "The Boy Who Lived." He doesn't feel like he can take credit for defeating Voldemort because he doesn't really remember what happened that night. Plus, all he's ever had to go on is how the Dursley's treated him. Add all of that up and that's the inner conflict Harry has to face and overcome in order to defeat Voldemort. 

Questions to ask of your character:

  • What fears or false beliefs are preventing your character from achieving their goal?
  • When did your character first begin to believe this fear or false belief?
  • When did your character try to overcome this fear or false belief and fail?
  • What were the major turning points in your character’s life where their fear or false belief was confirmed as the truth?
  • What lesson does your character need to learn in order to achieve their story goal?

 

5. What’s at stake if your character succeeds or fails?

It’s not enough to create conflict for conflict’s sake. The conflict you throw at your character has to personally affect your character and come with high stakes.

What are stakes exactly? Stakes are what’s your character is risking -- what he or she stands to lose or gain -- as he or she pursues their story goal. 

Stakes come in two forms. There are “public stakes” and “personal stakes.”

Public stakes affect other people besides your character. They might be global stakes or small-town stakes, but either way, they affect other people. Personal stakes mainly affect your character and have personal and significant meaning to him or her.

As your character pursues hir or her main story goal, they'll have to make choices, and each of these decisions needs to have something at stake. Why?

Well, when your character faces a tough decision between two equally good things or two equally bad things -- and when there's something at stake -- that's when readers really get to see what your character's made of and what they care about. 

For example, in The Hunger Games, there are both personal and public stakes for Katniss. If she doesn't take Prim's place as tribute, Prim will die. If Katniss doesn't win the Hunger Games, not only will Katniss die, but Prim and their mom won't have anyone to look after them or provide for them. Those are all personal stakes. Beyond that, Katniss wants to win because she hates President Snow and everything the Capital stands for. She wants to bring down the system so that no other children will have to take part in the Hunger Games and risk their lives. Those are public stakes.

 

Questions to ask of your character:

  • What does my character stand to gain if she's successful?
  • What does my character stand to lose if he fails?

Final Thoughts

There you have it! Five questions that will help you craft better, more well-rounded characters for your next story! I recommend doing this work not only for your main protagonist but for every other important character in your story, too. This will help you craft a believable, realistic-feeling cast of characters that readers will adore.

As a bonus exercise, pick a favorite book (or a book most like the one you're writing) and see if you can answer these five questions about the protagonist of the story. What do they want and why do they want it? What's standing in their way externally and internally? What do they stand to lose or gain? Was it easy or hard to find the answers to these five questions?

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